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I know there's something in this mess of writing, but I'm s t r u g g l i n g, my god. I've got a real clear sense of Niall in this fic and I think I know kinda what's going on in harry's head but I can't figure out if I'm forcing the structure of this plot on them or not. canon fics are also so hard bc the timelines!! I play fast and loose with the sequence of events most of the time but I also worry it kinda disrupts the mood sometimes, if someone's like WELL ACTUALLY